On the top of the
ride’s name there was an old, creepy-looking clown’s face. It had a black mouth
with only two or three teeth. And not to mention his eyes had smudges over them
and was covered in white make-up. But of course it was only a giant face. “I
don’t like the looks of that.” Shawnte, my dog, stated, looking up at me with his
big yellow eyes. “His smile is almost… sickening. Like he caused all this.”
I flicked one of my
dog’s ears. “Shut up! That’s so creepy!!!” I looked at the clown. And I swear I
saw one of his eyes move… just slightly. So I ran off to find another ride.
I soon found one with weird buttons on
the control panel. Shawnte followed at my feet, his tail between his legs. “I
don’t like this place, Shayne. Let’s just go home.” His voiced whined high,
like a four-year-old child. His eyes glistened, causing that puppy dog look.
But me, knowing Shawnte since I was a baby, didn’t fall for that.
“Get in the cart. I
wanna see if this works.” I pointed to what looked like a roller coaster cart.
I knew Shawnte was scared of roller coasters, but I wanted to tease him a bit.
Get his mind off of that creeped-up clown.
“Sh-Shayne! Are you
crazy?!” He screeched, his tail coming back up. For a dog, he could make great
facial expressions. Especially shocked ones. “If it does work, and I die… where
are you gonna find another talking dog, huh? That’s right, you can’t! And you
can’t tell you mom and dad either. They don’t know about my talking ability
because YOU don’t have the courage to tell them!” He huffed and sat down in
front of the cart. “I’m not doing it! I’m not. I’m not—“
“I’ll give you a
belly rub if you do it.” I said, with no emotion in my voice.
“Oh really?” Shawnte
looked at me suspiciously, his yellow eyes twinkling. “Alright I’ll do it~!” He
jumped in the cart. “Besides, it’s so old… I doubt it’ll actually work!” He
laughed it up.
I couldn’t help but
smile. I pushed a couple of the buttons, then pulled a little lever. The
creaking sound it made sent chills up my spine. But surprisingly enough the
cart started to move.
“WAAAAH~! SHAYNE!”
Shawnte screamed. The fur on his tail poofed out and he jumped off as quickly
as possible. “Shayne! I was on that thing! ….how does it still work?” His ears
slid back and his tail was once again in between his legs. “Whoever left did it
in a hurry… didn’t even turn off the electricity…” His voice wavered.
I looked back at the
clown. Has its smile gotten… bigger? Wider? “Shawnte?” I started, looking at
the dog. “Why do you think everybody left so quickly? I mean, it’s still
functional. All that we have to do is clean this place up a bit. We could make
a fortune!”
“Shayne…”
“We have to tell mom
and dad!”
“Shayne…”
“And also we could go
on that vacation we always wanted!”
“SHAYNE!”
“What?!”
“The clown…”
I looked over to the
clown again. “What about it?” I asked, staring at it.
“Was it always
looking this way?” Indeed the clown was looking at us.
“What are you talking
about? O-of course it h-has!” I stammered, trying my best not to be freaked
out. To be honest… I had no idea. “Maybe we should check out the ride. Then we
won’t be so scared.” I suggested, keeping my eyes on that hideous thing. I
could hear Shawnte whimper beside me. I patted his head and walked up to the
ride.
The name was
partially faded out, but I could read “The World’s Coolest Ride” The clown’s
face was in between the words “World’s” And “Coolest”. I looked at my dog and
walked in with him at my heels.
As I entered the
doorway, it became very dark and seemed as though the walls were closing in on
us. For the world’s coolest ride, it was kinda freaky. “I don’t like this, I
don’t like this…” Shawnte whimpered. I rolled my eyes and kept on walking. Soon
we came up to a door, or at least, I thought it was a door. It was too dark to
see. I pushed it open only to see a cart on a railroad looking thing. It seemed
to only be able to go into one tunnel.
“Shawnte? What do you
think is in the tunnel?” I asked my black lab. I looked at the tunnel but saw
white. The light was too bright to even look into. I wasn’t sure whether or not
to get into the cart.
“Get in the cart~!” a
voice called. A voice that was high-pitched and… cracked. The demand was more
aggressive than inviting.
I looked at my dog,
and he looked back. He could see the frightened, yet excited look on my face.
“No… no …. No! Shayne! What are you thinking?!” He cried, biting onto my pant
leg, trying to drag me away from the cart.
“C’mon… the
instructor told us to get into the cart.” I said, tying my dark purple hair
into a nice ponytail. “It’ll be fun!” I cheered.
But then Shawnte said
something to snap me back into reality. “What instructor…?” He asked, his own
voice quiet and scared.
We sat there in
silence
“Get in the cart.”
What?
“Get in the cart.”
What instructor?
“Get in the cart now!”
Abandoned…
“I SAID GET IN THE
CART!”
Nothing but….
“GET IN- -“
“No!”
I didn’t say it. I
looked over to my trembling dog that had said those words. “W-We won’t…” He
replied in a shaky voice. “Whoever you are… leave us alone!”
“Oh, but don’t you
know where you are?” The mysterious voice asked, just above a harsh whisper.
I looked around. I
saw some newspaper clippings on the walls that I hadn’t noticed before. I went
up to one of them and read it out loud so Shawnte could hear. “The World’s
Coolest Ride has been shut down for… mechanical problems…?” I looked at my dog
and he just looked back at me in utter confusion. I started to read again.
“Ever since this place was created this ride has excited many people. A fun
ride full of cute little dolls that sing a song about it being the best ride,
then you get to go on a little roller coaster. Candy drops on you and you get
to see all of the hanging strings from the ceiling. If one falls on you, you
get to pick out anything from the gift shop for free.” I looked at my dog. “If
it’s so good… why is it shut down?” I questioned.
“Keep reading…”
Shawnte demanded.
I sighed and looked
at the paper. “Ugh.. okay. Umm…. So one day the ride broke down. In anger a kid
vandalized the clowns face. Big mistake. The ride itself became more
aggressive, more… evil….” I gulped. “But that was only after the ride was fixed
by the clown’s creator… Who was then killed by his own hands?” Suddenly
everything around me looked, darker…. Scarier. “Shawnte, let’s go!”
I ran for the door
but it wouldn’t budge. I kept trying even after tears started to fill my eyes.
My legs and arms trembled.
…No way out.
“Get in the cart. Let
me take you for a ride~” The voice whispered in a taunting tone. “I make sure
you have a… hell of a time. You’ll be… dying for more. Don’t worry, I won’t
leave you… hanging! WAHAHAHAHA!” the laugh was sick and cracked.
“SHUTUP!” I screamed,
falling to my knees. I had snapped. I was trapped. I couldn’t open the door,
couldn’t get out!
Shawnte came up to me
to help me. “C’mon… let’s just go on the ride.” He urged, trying to get out of
this mess.
“I’ll kill you like
the rest~” the voice sneered. “Want to know why this place is abandoned? Go on
the ride~” He cheered.
I brushed myself off
and looked at Shawnte. “Let’s go.” I sniffed, knowing I had no other choice. I
patted him and got in the cart. My black lab… my best friend got in and lay
down in my lap. “I love you Shayne…” He sighed.
I sniffed and kissed
the top of his head. “I love you too, Shawnte.”
“How cute… Let’s go.”
The voice growled, starting the cart with a jolt. And soon we got sucked into
the bright light.
I could hear the
singing. “Enjoy it while you can. Cuz if you don’t you’ll zzzzz…. And zzzzz….
And don’t forget if you zzzz…. Zzzzzzz….DIE!” The song went. Well… that’s how
it went now from it being so old. Soon we got to see all the dolls. All of them
looked deformed in some way. Either the doll had no eyes. No mouth. An extra
body part that didn’t seem like it should have been placed there. Melted on,
stapled on, sewed on…. Almost…. Realistic.
“Like my song?” The
voiced hissed.
Ignoring it, we went
on with the ride. Some slots in the ceiling opened and something was thrown
down at us, causing my ponytail to become undone. As that happened the lights
disappeared, so now it was blindingly dark. “C-Candy…?” Shawnte stammered.
I paused before
answering him. I touched one of the “pieces of candy” and felt it squirming
beneath my fingers.
“No.” The voice and I
said at the same time.
I squirmed, but
didn’t make a sound as I felt the creatures that were covering us bite me and
dig into my skin. I couldn’t let this…this… thing know that I was freaked out.
Apparently, it could only hear us. Shawnte tried his best to hold in his
whimpers… but failed horribly.
Soon we were brought
back into light… but the creatures were gone… the bite marks remained though.
Shawnte licked my wounds, trying his best to keep me safe. I started to cry.
“Shawnte… I want to go home. We should have listened to mama and papa!” I clung
to my dogs fur and dug my face into his back.
“Sh-Shayne…” He said,
looking upwards and completely ignoring what I had said. “I know why people
went missing a few years back…” His voice wavered and shook, he sounded as if
he were going to cry. So I looked up to see what he was so freaked out about.
As soon as my eyes hit the ceiling, I screamed and cried and screamed some
more.
There were several
people hung by their necks, by the strings that would drop on people so they
could get a prize. Several people... “OH MY GOD!” I screeched, my voice echoing
throughout the tunnel. “THEY’RE ALL DEAD!!! MY GOD! MY GOD! AHHHH!!!” Tears ran
down my face like crazy and I thought I was going insane. Shawnte nuzzled his
head into my lap. “Oh my god… we’re going to die too. He’s going to kill us!” I
grabbed Shawnte’s head and hugged him super tight.
“Shayne… I love you.
I just want you to be safe!”
“I love you too
Shawnte!”
"Shayne..."
The dog said, still a small wavering tone in his voice.
I cuddled him. Next
thing I knew a body of what I think was supposed to be a teenage boy snapped
off the string and landed on top of us.
I covered in ears in
a panic as I heard a high pitch scream pierce my ears, only a few seconds later
did I realize the scream was coming from my own mouth. I quickly covered my
mouth and stopped my cries of stress.
Shawnte grabbed the
boy with his mouth and flung it off the cart. All I knew was that whatever was
going to happen next, was going to be the end of us.
~X~
“The clown.”
I looked over to the
clown again. “What about it?” I asked, staring at it.
“Was it always
looking this way?” Indeed the clown was looking at us.
“What are you talking
about? O-of course it h-has!” I stammered, trying my best not to be freaked
out. To be honest… I had no idea. “Maybe we should check out the ride. Then we
won’t be so scared.” I suggested, keeping my eyes on that hideous thing. I
could hear Shawnte whimper beside me.
“Or…” I said, slowly
turning away. “We can go home… forget everything that I said. This place was
abandoned for a reason, right? Maybe we shouldn’t be messing with anything.” I
laughed nervously and stared at the clown.
“Okay Shayne…. Let’s
go make some hot chocolate and chase some squirrels.” Shawnte squealed, his
tail wagging excitedly.
I looked at my dog
and laughed, patting his head. Then I looked at the clown. But this time
instead of a smile, he had a demented frown. I had a feeling that my thought
process of what could have happened was a bit too extreme… but now, I see I was
right on track. I walked to the gate, where my black lab was waiting excitedly.
Heh, there’s not way in hell that I’m ever coming back here….